WHAT A TWIST
I'm no animator so it's not like I'm the authority on this stuff, but I really think you need to look to some comic books or even some simpler anatomy books to start successfully drawing characters. Study some of the other animators on this site, see what they do with their line movement and thickness.
I have nothing constructive for the background. I just didn't like it.
I was not a fan of just the mouths moving. I'm not saying that you should quit animating though, I'd like to see you get better and one day see what you can come up with.
Everyone has taken their first meek step into something, this is your first step. Keep going.
I've looked at your other stuff and I like them, but I don't care much for this. Quickly looked at the youtube stuff that pertains to this and decided that you should probably ignore this person saying that shit rather than you two insulting each other back and forth.
It isn't quite, but any further down the rabbit hole and this could have had the potential to be a weaker form of hate art.
I don't think you animate like a peasant though.
Pretty simple animation.
But, WHAT A TWIST
Good idea to make a series out of. I enjoyed the voice acting.
The being said, that dog picture kept popping up in the top right corner. Don't know if it was intentional or not, but it was a bit distracting. The technical difficulties also seemed a little like a cop out to avoid doing that last bit of animation.
All in all though, pretty decent animation.
Oh it was definitely a cop out. But I had to rush and at 3am that stupid clip art kept making me laugh. Thanks for the review!
This wasn't that bad at all. The voice acting for Vinnie was pretty good, it was harder for me to understand the dog at times but that may be the mic quality.
I watched your other animation as well so I could get a better grasp of you as an animator and I think you've got the makings of greatness as long as you stick with and refine your craft.
I'm no animator, but I am an artist. Might I suggest some darker shading? The character features sometimes get lost in brightness.
Regardless, pretty good work. :)
Thanks for the review, really means a lot.
this was great. I loved all the sounds that you included, they really took me back.
and that effin' fairy... :P Great work!
ehhh... I mean, for 3 hours it's not terrible...
I mean, it looks nice and stuff, but it is awfully short...
Okay, this is coming from a guy that thoroughly enjoyed this animation.
The animation was of lower quality, didn't say it was LOW quality, just lower quality, and and sometimes the voices had some kind of static feedback. (really only when they were loud)
I kind of did enjoy the voice acting and the humor did it for me.
The life flashing before Diane's "eye" and the prophecy? Hahaha too good.
Have 4 stars.
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